Hano Eiyu
Forum Brawl Champion
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Post by Hano Eiyu on Feb 9, 2013 15:49:52 GMT -5
I would like your guys' opinions on my different styles of RPing. Most of them are influenced by people here and in other e-feds.
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Post by Dani on Feb 9, 2013 16:05:17 GMT -5
One note I will make is that the "what the hell is an ECW, what is a Sandman and the catchphrases" part in my RP was in reference to what I had seen in the Hoffman RP against you last round and was supporting of those who do have a catchphrase to use (since the Hoffman character did rag on Hano for setting an example of people using "stupid catchphrases" and doing "stupid stuff"). To the feedback. After reading your last round RP a day before posting mine and just got done reading this one. I will say you did a much better job this time by. The promo portion especially was better written while the character development portion is catching on well. I say the style you brought here is gonna work well for you once you start perfecting it and working out all the kinks and I think you'll do well with it going forward.
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Post by cyborg878 on Feb 9, 2013 16:20:53 GMT -5
I will echo Danielle's compliments. Your debut RP was good, but this rounds definitely shows improvement! I enjoyed the CD, it was interesting to see how Yano feels a bit like a fish out of water. The promo was fairly solid.
My only criticism, and it's not really big, would be when you turned your attention towards Draven. Personally I like to research my opponents a bit, just so I have a little more to say specifically towards them. Discuss their past and such. Though I doubt that will be detrimental to your RP this round.
8/10 Great job so far!
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Hano Eiyu
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Post by Hano Eiyu on Feb 23, 2013 11:14:56 GMT -5
New RP is up!
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Post by Dani on Feb 26, 2013 17:08:51 GMT -5
I have seen the RP. Couple of pointers I want to give here.
- Research your opponents: I noticed in the promo Hano stated he didn't know who Curtis was and how he hasn't made a single accomplishment in his career (he's one of the more accomplished guys here, former World and Platinum Champion as well as a PCW Hall of Famer). Good trash talkers like Curtis would jump all over that one as from every RP he's done in PCW, he's done his homework on the opponent. Do as much research as you can on your opponent whether it's reading past results, RP's, the accolades center on the forums, anything you can find to help you out. Research is key.
- Character development scene: I like the concept of what you attempted to do, but I would have liked to have seen more. It felt like more could have been done here. I'd look to add more to it or make it as similar as how you did it in your RP for the Scars of Wrestling Cup match last round.
Other than that, I do think it was a solid read and all you can do is just attempt to work and take any type of advice that comes your way.
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Hano Eiyu
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Posts: 365
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Post by Hano Eiyu on Mar 13, 2013 12:55:47 GMT -5
New RP is up! This is inspired by a video game ending.
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Hano Eiyu
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Posts: 365
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Post by Hano Eiyu on Mar 28, 2013 1:27:13 GMT -5
New RP ! I might have gotten lazy.
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Hano Eiyu
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Posts: 365
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Post by Hano Eiyu on Apr 23, 2013 3:25:16 GMT -5
New RP is up! I decided to do a little 4th wall breaking.
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LeKKter tha Lunatik
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Post by LeKKter tha Lunatik on Apr 23, 2013 8:58:12 GMT -5
right on towards your last RP; I like what you did there. It seemed more CD, but still, I like how you used esoteric statements towards your opponents and their style of RP. as well as your own. I was expecting some further advancement towards your match and its participants, though.
good job. how will it be judged??? .....I dunno.
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Hano Eiyu
Forum Brawl Champion
Returning unmasked!
Posts: 365
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Post by Hano Eiyu on Apr 23, 2013 9:50:05 GMT -5
That's what I'm afraid of.
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