dj03
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Post by dj03 on Sept 5, 2013 14:59:11 GMT -5
RP is up, and I'm looking forcsome feedback. You know what to do.
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Post by gzavadak on Sept 5, 2013 15:47:00 GMT -5
Granted, I may be crossing a line here in being an RP judge to give you feedback, but here goes.
Overall, man, I loved this effort from you. I thought it built pretty well on the last one, and I feel that you are definitely taking Jacobs in a good direction with your last few efforts.
Just keep your nose to the grindstone, and eventually, you'll have to get that win you crave. Keep it up, Dr. Pain.
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Post by Dani on Sept 5, 2013 18:13:34 GMT -5
I have to echo George's sentiments here. There's a lot of good that can be taken from it. You have been building yourself up better in your RP's as of late, despite the result, and your efforts are certainly not going unnoticed. These last two RP's are your best I have seen from you. Just keep your head up and keep on putting out the best you'll snap the snide without question.
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