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Post by Charlie Luzon on Sept 25, 2013 22:04:41 GMT -5
First off, I want to thank James Baker for letting me borrow his character, despite the short but to the point dialogue, which is how OI do things Thanks James This is practically the first time I asked for it lol xD so what did you guys think of it? Likes, dislikes? all that crap to help me improve the next time
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Post by Dani on Sept 27, 2013 16:10:05 GMT -5
I liked the RP. I liked the shine you gave to Jaiden and Rae and their potential interaction with Charlie interests me (heck you could give them a role in your RPs going forward). I also like your usage of the first person. I'm biased as I use it myself, but it fits you well. For critical part. Hmm... I'd have to think, but I liked what I had seen in the RP and I think it was well done in all honesty.
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